Revisions miss opportunity

How disappointing that with the proposed revisions to the Missal, the Nicene Creed (CR, July 15) will now end with this sentence, “For us men and for our salvation he came down from heaven, and by the Holy Spirit was incarnate of the Virgin Mary, and became man” – instead of, “For us and for our salvation he came down from heaven, and by the Holy Spirit was incarnate of the Virgin Mary, and became human.”